You did a really great job! For me this assignment was definitely the hardest one so far. But I feel like you at least got all of the requirements that he asked for. Your prices also seem very fair and the idea for concessions is really good too! My only comment for the next elevator pitch would be to maybe work on the 'hook' section?
Great job on your pitch video! This assignment challenged us to use a very different skill set than any yet, but I felt like you rose to the challenge and presented your idea very thoroughly. While I felt your idea is great, and you explained it in good detail, I would work on making your pitch more engaging to the customer.
Hi Leah! I really enjoyed watching your pitch. I feel like you got your point across effectively and laid out all the plans for your indoor dog park. After watching your pitch, I know all of the amenities that will be included, your pricing, and why it should exist in the first place. The only critique I can give is maybe including a scene with your dog in the pitch, no one can say no to the cuteness of a dog !
Hi Leah,
ReplyDeleteYou did a really great job! For me this assignment was definitely the hardest one so far. But I feel like you at least got all of the requirements that he asked for. Your prices also seem very fair and the idea for concessions is really good too! My only comment for the next elevator pitch would be to maybe work on the 'hook' section?
Hey Leah!
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your pitch video! This assignment challenged us to use a very different skill set than any yet, but I felt like you rose to the challenge and presented your idea very thoroughly. While I felt your idea is great, and you explained it in good detail, I would work on making your pitch more engaging to the customer.
Hi Leah!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed watching your pitch. I feel like you got your point across effectively and laid out all the plans for your indoor dog park. After watching your pitch, I know all of the amenities that will be included, your pricing, and why it should exist in the first place. The only critique I can give is maybe including a scene with your dog in the pitch, no one can say no to the cuteness of a dog !