1. The Pitch
2. Reflection
I didn't receive too much feedback on my last pitch but the few things my peers pointed out to me were that I lacked a hook, that is needed to be more engaging to the customers, and that I should include my dog in the video. None of this feedback really surprised me and I loved the idea of having my dog in it, I just knew it would make the filming process a bit harder.
3. What I Changed?
I took all of the feedback discussed above and tried to incorporate them into my pitch this time. I made a bit of a hook at the beginning, which also helped me engage the customers, and I included my dog in the whole video. I was still a little uncomfortable in front of the camera but having my pup beside me made it a little easier.
